Post by Phoenix on Jan 22, 2007 19:01:36 GMT 10
Yay, it seems like my 2 new beyblade fanfics are going to be a hit. Well i'll give ya a lil preview of them:
Story Title: The Phoenix Princess
Summary: Dranzer has asked a girl to help Kai. But how does Dranzer know this girl and why can she speak to her? KaiOC
Preview: A girl with flaming red hair and piecing blue eyes sighed deeply as she gazed into the all-seeing statue. The statue was made entirely out of a special type of diamond that would not be destroyed by intense heat. It was in the shape of a large phoenix with its head lowered as if it was bowing to her. She watched as the image swirled on the large bird's forehead. a flash of red appeared before it formed into a handsome boy with red hair and aqua eyes.
"Tala," she whispered as a sadness washed over her. A coo was heard nearby. She turned her head and watched as a phoenix closed its beak before watching her intensely. she smiled at the bird. it laid down beside her, allowing her to gently lean on it. it cooed again as the girl looked up to find many phoenixes and humanoid phoenixes flying around.
"How is your master treating you my dear Dranzer?" the girl asked the phoenix. the phoenix turned its head towards her and in a strong feminine voice replied, "Kai is treating me well. But..." Dranzer stopped.
Story Title: Bleed Like Me
Summary: He’s abusive. She’s his girlfriend. When his abuse goes too far, she turns to her's and Tala's best friend for help. Will she ever be able to forgive and forget him? TalaOC KaiOC
Preview: "Tala," a blonde hair girl of 17 said softly. The said red head turned around. His eyes held an evil glint.
"Please stop Tala," she said as she ran to him. Blood dripped down his clenched fist as he stared back at the guy that he had beaten to a bloody pulp. As soon as she touched his arm, he flung her to the ground.
"Tala. Stop it," she said through her tears. he grabbed her by the hair and dragged her back to their place so that no one could see what happened next.
He threw her onto the bed.
"You. You’re just the same as that arsehole," Tala said as he slapped her across the face. She tasted the metallic blood as she bit her lip.
"Stop it, please," she whispered.
"Why should i? You were flirting with him," Tala growled as he talked about the guy that he had just beaten.
"i was talking to him. Not flirting," she said as she stood up. He punched her in the stomach making her fall back on the bed in pain.
"You're the one that drove me to do this Phoenix," he spat at the blonde before turning and walking out of the bedroom. she clutched her stomach as she shut her piercing fiery blue eyes in pain. She cried herself to sleep. that night she slept alone.
P.S. I just noticed they've slighty changed the look on www.fanfiction.net
Story Title: The Phoenix Princess
Summary: Dranzer has asked a girl to help Kai. But how does Dranzer know this girl and why can she speak to her? KaiOC
Preview: A girl with flaming red hair and piecing blue eyes sighed deeply as she gazed into the all-seeing statue. The statue was made entirely out of a special type of diamond that would not be destroyed by intense heat. It was in the shape of a large phoenix with its head lowered as if it was bowing to her. She watched as the image swirled on the large bird's forehead. a flash of red appeared before it formed into a handsome boy with red hair and aqua eyes.
"Tala," she whispered as a sadness washed over her. A coo was heard nearby. She turned her head and watched as a phoenix closed its beak before watching her intensely. she smiled at the bird. it laid down beside her, allowing her to gently lean on it. it cooed again as the girl looked up to find many phoenixes and humanoid phoenixes flying around.
"How is your master treating you my dear Dranzer?" the girl asked the phoenix. the phoenix turned its head towards her and in a strong feminine voice replied, "Kai is treating me well. But..." Dranzer stopped.
Story Title: Bleed Like Me
Summary: He’s abusive. She’s his girlfriend. When his abuse goes too far, she turns to her's and Tala's best friend for help. Will she ever be able to forgive and forget him? TalaOC KaiOC
Preview: "Tala," a blonde hair girl of 17 said softly. The said red head turned around. His eyes held an evil glint.
"Please stop Tala," she said as she ran to him. Blood dripped down his clenched fist as he stared back at the guy that he had beaten to a bloody pulp. As soon as she touched his arm, he flung her to the ground.
"Tala. Stop it," she said through her tears. he grabbed her by the hair and dragged her back to their place so that no one could see what happened next.
He threw her onto the bed.
"You. You’re just the same as that arsehole," Tala said as he slapped her across the face. She tasted the metallic blood as she bit her lip.
"Stop it, please," she whispered.
"Why should i? You were flirting with him," Tala growled as he talked about the guy that he had just beaten.
"i was talking to him. Not flirting," she said as she stood up. He punched her in the stomach making her fall back on the bed in pain.
"You're the one that drove me to do this Phoenix," he spat at the blonde before turning and walking out of the bedroom. she clutched her stomach as she shut her piercing fiery blue eyes in pain. She cried herself to sleep. that night she slept alone.
P.S. I just noticed they've slighty changed the look on www.fanfiction.net
